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Post by Ren Nakamura on Sept 29, 2010 2:51:47 GMT
Civvie StuffName: Ren Nakamura Age: 25 Sex: Male Nationality: Japanese Occupation: Rescue Force member and Antique store worker Species: Human and Worm/Orphnoch hybrid Celebrity Claim: Takuya Kimura Hair color/style: Light brown Eyes: Brown Description: Ren keeps his hair long and somewhat sun-bleached to keep it light. He usually wears warmer clothing, sporting a light, open black greatcoat in the colder months, with a grayish-blue scarf. Otherwise, in the warmer months he wears dark, olive-green slacks, black boots, and longsleeve black or white shirts. The real Ren wears his Rescue Force uniform primarily, while the Worm usually carries no packs or anything with him, but keeps things in his pockets, including his Avon System. He is now the Raven Orphnoch, fighting for control of himself. He is able to manifest his form in different bodyparts as a show that he is in control over the Orphnoch. Rescue ForceName: R1 Henshin Device/Sequence: He steps into a pod in the Rescue Phoenix and swipes his Chakusou card into his Rescue Commander as he goes down, making his armor mold around his body. Forms: - Form Name: R1
Appearance:
An orange body suit with blue torso armor and accents on the helmet. He has gray armor for boots, gauntlets, elbow and shoulder pads.
First on the left
Transformation: While in the Rescue Phoenix, Ren steps into a tube and descends while swiping his Chakusou card in his Rescue Commander, summoning his armor.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Breaker;
Finisher(s): N/A
- Form Name: R1 Max
Appearance:
His spandex becomes silvery white while his blue becomes a deeper, almost silverly blue. His chest armor now has more components within as well.
R1 Max
Transformation:
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Divider: Sonic Divide, Aqua Divide and Flame Divide. Also has Drill and Sword Modes.
Finisher(s): The Divides; either a wind powered, water powered or fire powered shot by throwing the spinning blade out.
Worm Ren: Rider StuffName: Kamen Rider Avon Henshin Device/Sequence: The Avon System is a grayish-white ovular remote control with a series of buttons running up and down it. When needed, Ren can draw the System, press a central button enclosed by four other buttons, and then put it face-down on his waist. Energy expands out from the crystal at the tip, forming his belt. He spins it around, presses four buttons, and then the central button, and energy expands over his body, forming a light gray layer of armor, which then is covered with his thicker, gray Avon armor. Forms: - Form Name: Kamen Rider Avon
Appearance:
Light gray armor. The shoulders stick out about six inches and are somewhat cylindrical. The sides are curved, keeping them smooth, while the top is arched up and runs smoothly along the top.
His leg armor that ran from his calf to below his knee is similar to the top armor. He also has similar armor from his wrists to his elbows. His chest has gray, smooth armor that was slightly thicker around the arms to match the shoulder armor. He has lighter gray "spandex" armor from under his chest armor to his waist, and then again on his arms and legs.
His helmet is rounded and segmented at the crown of the head, providing two miniscule "spikes" at the sides, which grooved down to rest at a point above the visor.
Transformation: When needed, Ren can draw the System, press a central button enclosed by four other buttons, and then put it face-down on his waist. Energy expands out from the crystal at the tip, forming his belt. He spins it around, presses four buttons, and then the central button, and energy expands over his body, forming a light gray layer of armor, which then is covered with his thicker, gray Avon armor.
Weapons and Abilities: By removing the Avon System from his waist, he can either snap the bottom off and use the bottom as a handle to wield it as a firearm, or, he can press the 'up' button above the central button to expand an energy blade.
Finisher(s): Ren can impale his foe with his sword, and then press the 'up' button, expanding the blade into a wider weapon, slicing his foe through. He can also hold the System in his hand, sideways, and press the very top button, creating an energy enveloped Rider Punch. Likewise, he can keep it on his waist, press the top button, and use an energy enveloped Rider Kick.
- Form Name: Shining Avon
Appearance:
His System gains new armor, the shoulders open, becoming rounded, but with ovular expansions coming out, shining yellow. His armor turns from gray to a yellow/gray color as well, while the new expansion is pure yellow. His helmet opens, the eyes becoming smaller, like normal eyes, less like a visor. The helmet comes up, becoming more regal and detailed. The eyes then reset, becoming a visor again, but the shape curves with two points below each eye.
His legs become rippled with the yellow armor along the shins. The knees become rounded and inset ovals of armor. His chest becomes more open, more muscled in appearance.
Transformation:
He pulled his Shining Key, a blue flashdrive-like object out, and pulls it open. It starts as a blue drive, but the drive 'cover' can move around in a full 360 degrees to reveal the tip. He switches the cover around and puts the end into the new, central opening of his Henshin device. He turns it, putting the flat sides on top and bottom instead of left and right, unlike when it began. He turned it once more, turning the flat onto the left and right, fully initializing the system sequence.
He pushes back on the Key. It goes down, fitting into the open slot. Then a blue piece was in the center of the Avon System Henshin device.
Weapons and Abilities: A more regal Avon System, with a more regal, thicker blade, as well as being able to become a rifle, as opposed to a handgun, giving him more powerful attacks.
Finisher(s): Rider Punch and Kick, like before, and the Dragon Drive. When the Drive is initiated, power swirls around the blade in a spiral. Ren can slash the sword out and send the power swirl flying out into a serpentine attack, increasing with power as it travels.
- Form Name: Raven Orphnoch
Appearance: A humanoid bird. He has clawed, talon feet, a smooth, armored chest, clawed hands with feathers coming off of the arms, and wings emerging from his back. His head becomes slightly helmeted, with a small beak emerging and twisting feather designs around his face.
Transformation: He has a tendency of saying "Henshin" when taking on his Orphnoch form. He simply ripples and transforms. He even says it when manifesting a single piece of himself, such as his arm for combat.
Weapons and Abilities: No weapons. He can fly, is very strong, fast, and agile.
Finisher(s): He can fly high and come crashing down with amazing speed to tear his opponent apart with claws.
Other Equipment:Inside StuffPersonality: Ren is a calm man who usually isn't too serious. Upon being given the Avon System/joining Rescue Force, however, he became more serious, finding that his duty was beyond his formerly simple life. The Worm works with old friends from his school days, reflecting often back on how simple things once were, and then what things had become after getting the System. The real Ren has a hardened side after going through so many disasters and seeing so much death. Both believe firmly in justice, deciding that even if they die, as long as they can inspire others and keep the peace, they've done their jobs. Strengths:- Analytical. Ren analyzes every situation before he enters it, planning his attacks ahead of time, and rarely variating his plans, unless he absolutely has to.
- Holmesian deduction. Ren is a fan of Sherlock Holmes, and has studied all manners of Holmesian deduction that he could, hoping to be like the great detective.
- Calm. Ren doesn't get angered easily. He is always in a state of calm, able to stop anyone who attempts to win by using emotions against him.
Weaknesses:- Calm. It is a strength of Ren's, but also, a weakness. With only a calm, unable to really become angered or enraged, he can't use emotion as his own weapon.
- Overthinks. He overthinks everything and doesn't vary his styles or methods of combat. It serves as both his strength and weakness. He doesn't need to plan in battle, but at the same time, he can't. If he begins to lose, chances are he won't win in the end, because he won't change styles. He sees his plan as the correct one from the start, and won't change.
- Justice. Being a firm believer in justice, Ren refuses to violate his morals, even if he needs to in order to win. He'd rather have himself get killed than have to do something he views as morally evil or black. He cannot violate his own code of ethics, no matter how much it restricts him.
History:Ren was born as the only child in a fairly well-to-do family. His father was a police officer, and his mother died in childbirth. Ren was raised by his father, by old money, and by nurse-maids. Ren rose quickly through his school days, scoring high marks in his classes. However, he began to get lower marks, lower and lower, becoming bored with his school, deciding that he wanted to follow in his father's footsteps, and was unable to see where class would get him. Then he read Sherlock Holmes. After reading about the great detective, he started to care more about school. He began to try to excel in chemistry and any other classes, trying to pick up on more and more of Holmesian deduction. While his grades remained mediocre, he believed that he learned what he needed to, and began to look into the criminal justice system. He failed in his attempts to join the police force, and left that job, and his father's money, joining Rescue Force as R1. Eventually, when the Japanese branch of Rescue Force was attacked by Worms and fell, he was copied by one of them. He went on to Europe with the rest of Force while the Worm gained amnesia, believing himself to be Ren and joined two old friends who were working with antiques, deciding to make his own life, away from his father, his old money, and with friends. Courting one of them proved to be a problem, and he didn't desire anything with the other, so he continued on in an uncomfortable situation, until the day arrived that the Avon System became available to him when a Prince worker was attacked by an Imin. Taking the System, using his sense of justice and his knowledge of crime, Ren became Kamen Rider Avon to keep the peace and preserve justice, becoming a pure heroic Kamen Rider, refusing to do anything less than what justice would permit him to do. Anything Else: NA Sample RP: Ren stumbled away from his foe. He looked up and down the body of the unknown creature in front of him. Was this one of the Orphenoc he had heard about? Perhaps a Fangire? He was never good with creatures. He shook his head, straightening his back as he stood tall. He reached into his pocket, taking grasp of the colder object he found, and then drew it out, holding up the white and gray remote-like object. "I don't know what you are." Ren said, shaking his head, "but you are a monster. No matter what you actually are called--and I shall not designate you by naming you, you vile creature--the result will be the same. I shall destroy you." He threw his right arm out, pressing a button on his remote. "Henshin!" He shouted, slamming it onto his waist. He ran forward, as did the creature. He knew he couldn't do anything until he transformed to face it. Energy erupted around his body, covering him in light armor that would do him no good. Taking one more step, he was enveloped in his sleek, gray armor. The creature no longer stood any chance as far as Ren was concerned. Ren drew his Henshin device off of his waist, pushing the 'up' button, extending a teal energy blade. He stabbed it through his foe, while simultaneously ducking his head to avoid an attack. He pressed the 'up' button again, expanding the blade widely, cutting his foe down, ending the threat. "Well, that's what happens when you face justice." Ren said.
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Post by Suzie Miyazaki on Sept 29, 2010 15:32:42 GMT
I know you =D
Anyway this is approved. I like how you've made his strengths and weaknesses one and the same, like how his sense of justice, and combat style can drag him down a little as well as help him fight. I'm interested to see what you need to create to add his origin story.
I do just need you to change a couple of things on your Profile, first you need to change the display name to "Ren" or "Ren Nakamura" or something because at the moment it just shows your login name that doesn't have a capital letter. Also, would you mind switching the avatar you have at the moment to one of Takuya Kimura? Only the avatars are supposed to represent our In-Character selves.
Sorry for being nitpicky XD
Welcome aboard =3
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Post by Ren Nakamura on Sept 29, 2010 20:23:37 GMT
Please do switch my name to either one. I'm not sure why it's not capitalized, I could have sworn I made it capitalized.
Yeah, I can change my avatar, no problem. And I'll PM you origin stuff.
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Post by Suzie Miyazaki on Sept 29, 2010 21:11:49 GMT
'Kay, I changed it for you, for future reference if you need to change your name again (for any reason). You go to "Display Name" and change that, at the time it was blank, ergo, your login name was used instead. You still use the normal "ren" to log in to your account.
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Post by Ren Nakamura on Jun 6, 2011 20:17:43 GMT
I decided to make the rest of Ren's team, I assume it requires approval. Civvie StuffName: Nago Hasake Age: 25 Sex: Male Nationality: Japanese Occupation: R2 in Rescue Force Species: Human Celebrity Claim: Ryo Nishikido Hair color/style: Black, thick and long down the back to nearly the base of his neck. It peaks above both eyes, with some hair hanging down between. Eyes: Brown Description: Nago often wears his silver colored R2 uniform, but otherwise wears button up shirts and loose ties, with the occasional suit jacket, though he prefers not to. He often wears tan pants and motorcycle boots, but doesn’t bike. Hero StuffName: R2 Type Of Hero: Rescue Force Henshin Device/Sequence: He steps into a pod in the Rescue Phoenix and swipes his Chakusou card into his Rescue Commander as he goes down, making his armor mold around his body. Forms: - Form Name: R2
Appearance: An orange body suit with silver torso armor and accents on the helmet. He has gray armor for boots, gauntlets, elbow and shoulder pads. Second on the left
Transformation: While in the Rescue Phoenix, he steps into a tube and descends while swiping his Chakusou card in his Rescue Commander, summoning his armor.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Breaker;
- Break Hammer: Hammer mode.
- Break Ax: Ax mode.
- Break Pick: Pick mode.
- Break Hand: Manipulator mode.
- Break Drill: Drill mode.
- Break Shot: Simple information analysis mode that can also be used as a digital camera.
- Break Rope: Rope mode.
Finisher(s): NA
- Form Name: R2 Max
Appearance: His spandex becomes silvery white while his silver becomes a lighter, shining silver. His chest armor now has more components within as well.
Basically this.
Transformation: He takes the Max Commander and swipes the Max Chakusou Card to transform.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Divider: Sonic Divide, Aqua Divide and Flame Divide. Also has Drill and Sword Modes.
Finisher(s): The Divides; either a wind powered, water powered or fire powered shot by throwing the spinning blade out.
Inside Stuff
Personality: Nago is a man who never loses his composure, even under the greatest of stress. He’s a man with a cool composure and disposition, who finds rescue work to be perfect for him, as he rarely panics, and always knows what he’s doing. He’s not overconfident; he’s just that good. Some don’t like that about him, but Ren sees it as one of his better points. He’s very intelligent and takes his mental work as seriously as his physical, keeping a body in peak physical condition as well as his mind.
Strengths:
- Great body and mind
- Completely devoted to the rescue work
- Confidence and ability
Weaknesses:
- Might be overconfident
- Can’t pilot vehicles, yet wants to, and fails every chance he tries
- Not cut out for any other type of work; once he hurts himself or is too old, he’s rather screwed
History: Nago grew up raised by an older sister, as his parents always were out working to try to give them a good life, which they weren’t able to do, and had untimely deaths due to overworking and exhaustion. Nago’s sister then started to fall into the same trap and fell ill as well. He began to work to take care of her, but lost her as well.
After mourning his family, Nago decided he couldn’t fall into the same trap. He began to study very hard and work very hard, seeing a future in the UFDA. He had already lost so much, why shouldn’t he help others from losing their loved ones? So he worked for them, eventually becoming a Rescue Force member and R2, using his years of hard work to become one of the best the UFDA had to offer.
Civvie Stuff
Name: Aoi Kato
Age: 20
Sex: Female
Nationality: Japanese
Occupation: R3 in Rescue Force
Species: Human
Celebrity Claim: Miwa
Hair color/style: Long and black, hanging down her forehead but stopped just above the eyes. The sides hang down and frame her face in hair.
Eyes: Brown
Description: Aoi often wears her red R3 uniform, but outside of that she wears skirts in mostly white and light blue, and occasionally wears jeans along with boots and pink shirts. She has a calm, sweet face that often cannot show anger or anything like that, but always remains calm. She often wears scarves of various colors.
Hero Stuff
Name: R3
Type Of Hero: Rescue Force
Henshin Device/Sequence: She steps into a pod in the Rescue Phoenix and swipes his Chakusou card into her Rescue Commander as she goes down, making her armor mold around her body.
Forms: - Form Name: R3
Appearance: An orange body suit with red torso armor and accents on the helmet. She has gray armor for boots, gauntlets, elbow and shoulder pads. First on the left
Transformation: While in the Rescue Phoenix, she steps into a tube and descends while swiping her Chakusou card in her Rescue Commander, summoning her armor.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Breaker;
- Break Hammer: Hammer mode.
- Break Ax: Ax mode.
- Break Pick: Pick mode.
- Break Hand: Manipulator mode.
- Break Drill: Drill mode.
- Break Shot: Simple information analysis mode that can also be used as a digital camera.
- Break Rope: Rope mode.
Finisher(s): NA
- Form Name: R3 Max
Appearance: Her spandex becomes silvery white while her red becomes a lighter, shining red. Her chest armor now has more components within as well.
Basically this.
Transformation: She takes the Max Commander and swipes the Max Chakusou Card to transform.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Divider: Sonic Divide, Aqua Divide and Flame Divide. Also has Drill and Sword Modes.
Finisher(s): The Divides; either a wind powered, water powered or fire powered shot by throwing the spinning blade out.
Inside Stuff
Personality: Aoi is a fairly quiet, reserved woman who means well, but is kind of shy and doesn’t talk to many people, making the job a bit harder. However, during a rescue, she opens up a lot more due to the urgency of the situation. When she was younger, she always wanted to do this job, making it a lifelong ambition that she has finally realized, and so she has a strong body, as well as a good mind, always getting high grades in school, leaving her as a bit of an outcast among her peers. She’s the youngest member of Rescue Force, as well as the newest, and feels she has great expectations to live up to. As such, she can be easily discouraged.
Strengths:
- Great mind
- Has a deep, burning passion for the job
- Has worked her whole life to join
Weaknesses:
- Quiet and withdrawn
- Easily discouraged
- Can’t make friends very easily
History: Aoi grew up with a family who cared a lot about her and gave her whatever she needed, seeing a great future in store for her from a very young age. She was almost prodded into all of the hard work she did in school, but she enjoyed it. However, all of this forced studying left her in recluse from friends, leaving her to be shy and quiet later in life. When she was seven, her school had a disaster. Rescue workers came, but the disaster grew out of hand, and they couldn’t stop it. Rescue Force came and saved everyone, inspiring Aoi to want to join them someday.
After this incident, she began to work on more than just her mind, attempting to get into the shape she would need to join the UFDA and Rescue Force someday. Using her intellect, she got through all of her classes later in life without having to do much, so she could focus more on her work to join Rescue Force rather than be sidetracked by classes. This still left her as a bit of a recluse and outcast, but she managed to get into Rescue Force, serving as R3.
Civvie Stuff
Name: Misaki Miyagi
Age: 23
Sex: Female
Nationality: Japanese
Occupation: R4 in Rescue Force
Species: Human
Celebrity Claim: Aya Ueto
Hair color/style: Brown and wavy at the sides, it goes down just past her shoulders.
Eyes: Brown
Description: She usually wears her white R4 uniform, but outside of work, she often wears jeans along with white shirts of various sorts; t-shirts, sweaters, etc., usually also wearing scarves in different colors along with boots.
Hero Stuff
Name: R3
Type Of Hero: Rescue Force
Henshin Device/Sequence: She steps into a pod in the Rescue Phoenix and swipes his Chakusou card into her Rescue Commander as she goes down, making her armor mold around her body.
Forms: - Form Name: R3
Appearance: An orange body suit with white torso armor and accents on the helmet. She has gray armor for boots, gauntlets, elbow and shoulder pads. Last on the right
Transformation: While in the Rescue Phoenix, she steps into a tube and descends while swiping her Chakusou card in her Rescue Commander, summoning her armor.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Breaker;
- Break Hammer: Hammer mode.
- Break Ax: Ax mode.
- Break Pick: Pick mode.
- Break Hand: Manipulator mode.
- Break Drill: Drill mode.
- Break Shot: Simple information analysis mode that can also be used as a digital camera.
- Break Rope: Rope mode.
Finisher(s): NA
- Form Name: R4 Max
Appearance: Her spandex becomes silvery white while her white becomes a lighter, shining silver. Her chest armor now has more components within as well.
Basically this.
Transformation: She takes the Max Commander and swipes the Max Chakusou Card to transform.
Weapons and Abilities: Rescue Divider: Sonic Divide, Aqua Divide and Flame Divide. Also has Drill and Sword Modes.
Finisher(s): The Divides; either a wind powered, water powered or fire powered shot by throwing the spinning blade out.
Inside Stuff
Personality: Misaki is confident and always knows what she’s doing, seeing herself as possibly second in command, behind Ren. She excels in vehicle piloting, able to save arguably the most amounts of lives, and attempts to live up to an impossibly high standard set by her father, who is a captain in the UFDA. She always tries to impress him and gain more respect among both her peers and the others of the UFDA and the various divisions within it. She leaves little time to a personal life, finding that work is the best she can do. She struggles with this, as she often wants normalcy, but can’t break the standards set unto her, to her dismay.
Strengths:
- A great warrior and worker
- Confidence
- Vehicle piloting skills
Weaknesses:
- High standards to live up to
- No personal life
- Can’t break out of the shadow she put herself under
History: Misaki grew up with her father as a captain ranked member of the UFDA, watching over various parts, including the old Rescue Force. She grew up with great admiration for him, due to his job, and grew up with a passion for the job as well, if for nothing other than it would make her father notice her. Everything she did as she grew up with in preparation for joining Rescue Force, just to please her father. She hoped to become leader, and someday a captain. She told her father this, who encouraged her to continue on.
As the years went by, she eventually reached her position in Rescue Force, expecting to be the first female R1 due to her skills and scores in various rescue examinations. However, she was given the title of R4, while Ren Nakamura became R1. She hated Ren for a while, but then decided that she would accept it, as she could still become a captain, and that’s what mattered. She was also the only good vehicle pilot, with Ren being second, and the first to use the Max Commander successfully. She decided that as long as she continued her hard work, she would reach her ultimate goals.
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Post by Suzie Miyazaki on Jun 6, 2011 20:31:53 GMT
You'll need a new face for Nago. Mainly because Hayami Mokomichi's been taken for Hayate. (Remember you were going to use him for Yuuga Bara before you remembered). Other than that they're pretty cool.
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Post by Ren Nakamura on Jun 6, 2011 21:55:10 GMT
I honestly didn't recognize him that time, unlike last. He looks different in every picture I find of him.
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Post by Max Taggart on Apr 22, 2012 20:33:04 GMT
Hey, i had a thought.
since my Kabuto character is actually from the future, would i be able to keep him if i were to tweak his bio those specifications?
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Post by Noa Clarke on Apr 22, 2012 20:34:40 GMT
Link in the banner.
You can keep him, it's just the system that's gone. Noa just found the belt and the Zecter came to her. Your character is still yours, just without Kabuto.
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