The Jetmen [FINISHED]

[The Jetmen]

A late addition, should have been at the footer of the profile. This is Raina's Mecha and ship.

Mecha Name: Silver Phantom
Type Of Mecha: Flight
Image/ Description: A sleek black and grayish silver craft that is space-worthy, it was hidden in a secret compound in her original dimension, that Takeda and Raina had to go through in order to escape. With a bridge, Captain's and crew quarters, storage, medical bay, engine room, a communications and computer room, and a main area, it seals off the rooms in safety zones when the transformation occurs.

Mecha mode is a black and grayish appearance, with relatively standard legs and arms that retract or extend with ease, armor being on each of those. The head is black and gray with green eyes and a humanoid appearance. Has an energy vortex on its chest that can summon the Phantom Saber, Phantom Lancer, or the DeltaPhantom, a wing array with twin rockets on the back that attaches to Silver Phantom's back.

Motif: Stealth craft, Jet

Ship Abilities: In Flight Mode, it has a pair of heavy energy cannons, and a number of self-replicating missiles and torpedoes, most of which aren't used. It can also hover, and when it does, the heavy energy cannons are offline, instead giving rise to a number of anti-personnel energy and rail guns that hit hard on ground targets. Also equipped with a stealth system, only usable in ship mode, to hide the ship from prying eyes. (Though it isn't foolproof). Also stores Silver Eagle's weapons.

Mecha Abilities: In Mecha Mode, it has a pair of gauntlets, which can either block shots, unfurl into small hand to hand blades, or wrist weapons that fire either missiles or energy blasts. Able to perform the Virtual Divider, an invisible wall that the mecha can bounce back off of if sent flying. It can change between ship and mecha mode at will. Summons the Phantom Saber, a long black and silver sword, the Phantom Lancer, a one-bladed naginata, and the Phantom Rifle - A one handed gun that doubles as a transport device. Also summons the DeltaPhantom for flight.

Transformation: Flies upward after the transformation program has been activated and all non-essential rooms sealed off, the forward part of the craft folding down to form a chest plate, the arms and legs unfurling from either side of the side and rear compartments, the rest of which is covered by a strong belt. Armor unfurls onto the joints, and the head appears on top, flashing into place.

Attacks: Phantom Shooting - high powered shots from their ranged weapon, or the wrist weapons. Helps weaken the target.

Phantom Strike - A powered attack from the Lancer, weakens the target.

Phantom Kick - A double kick delivered either on the ground or in the air, weakens the target.

Finishers: Phantom Break - the classic Mecha finishing attack, it pulses with energy, as its thrust high and then spun around once, forming the shape of a moon with a forboding sound, before slashing through it, taking down the monster.

Megazord Component: It’s its own Megazord

[[Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke]

Okay, not sure how I just saw this. With Skype's magic powers, Cross, if you could get back to me and Rei, I'll message you next time I see you.

[Kase]

We will speak further of this tomorrow, Kaisu, when you're actually around longer.

[[Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke]

Yippity kay yay. One party is still in dispute.

I'm putting this character under lock.

[Suzie Miyazaki]

Okay, suggestions for what you can do:

Rei:
1) Change the colours of storm and Flame, like make them a few shades lighter or darker etc.
2) Change the name, there's plenty of other synonyms for Flame and Storm (Fire, Typhoon, Heat, Hail etc.).
3) Change the head crest and how it folds out (Agito's extend outwards but Gills's mouth opens maybe if your Agito gets spurs or shoulder thingies (Like wings))
4) Change the shape of the weapons blades, like a narrower longer sword for Flame, or a massive one (Think JRPG's), Storm form's based off of water so you have applications for a Trident anyway, as well as schythes, warblades, and a bunch of other badass polearms and swords.

Just make some changes that are cosmetic and don't affect her abilities.

Kaisu:
The monster form is a fairly important part of Raina's character that's already been introduced so just removing it out of universe isn't an option. Also when you put up Nakida you said you were going to add the other forms as she went on so there isn't much you can do, even though I'll admit that you said you were going to use/ add them eventually. Maybe you could add some original forms? So that she evolves in a different way? Or take some of the ideas I gave Rei to modify your own versions of Nakida?

Alternatively I can just split the forms up between you. It's your (Both of you, Kaisu and Rei's) choice.

[[Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke]

The Monster Form shouldn't be there in the first place. At least not Exceed Gills. Gills was only there in the Decade bastardisation.

My problem here is the originality of this.

And also, the approval here was a mistake anyway.

[Suzie Miyazaki]

Apr 16, 2012 0:53:41 GMT [Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke said:

The Monster Form shouldn't be there in the first place. At least not Exceed Gills. Gills was only there in the Decade bastardisation.

I think the picture of Exceed Gills is just a comparison, it's not actually Gills, just similar.

Apr 16, 2012 0:53:41 GMT [Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke said:

My problem here is the originality of this.

Which is why we're asking Rei to alter the forms a bit.

[The Jetmen]

Apr 16, 2012 0:53:41 GMT [Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke said:

The Monster Form shouldn't be there in the first place. At least not Exceed Gills. Gills was only there in the Decade bastardisation.

My problem here is the originality of this.

Excuse me, but you're incorrect there. Let me explain. I chronicled her exact stage of evolution in the history. The few fights she helped in, were as the regular monster form. After that unfortunate event happened to her, she evolved. I gave a picture reference of it to give an idea of what it was SIMILAR to, not what it was. I'm not surprised that that made no sense to you on skype. A few threads in the RP and I was going to evolve her to Agito, hence removing the monster form from the picture completely. Simply put if you want me to remove that, you kill my plot completely, and if you want me to remove those forms, you kill vital evolution points of the plot. That is something I will not permit to happen.

And also, the approval here was a mistake anyway.

There's totally no hint of "working with the other person", here. Actions speak louder than words, and you've shown you're not willing to. Otherwise you'd have replied more positively to the side of the post that Cross directed at you, instead of being so flippant. Simple logic, not an insult.

I think the picture of Exceed Gills is just a comparison, it's not actually Gills, just similar.

Thank you Cross, someone who actually understands my intent here.

Which is why we're asking Rei to alter the forms again

^ Fixed. This whole thing of "Change this," or "Fix that." has been really one sided...I highly doubt that is fair.

At any rate, I declare my willingness to do the right thing and make limited changes that follow Cross', and RP accepted guidelines, but Kaisu, if you're unwilling to pull your weight and do the same, then maybe you should have remembered the Golden Rule first. Treat others the way you would want to be treated. In short, treat me like a jerk, don't expect a bed of roses from me, that includes my skepticism of you.

[Bridge Carson]

That does seem fair to me. And anyway, you don't actually need to RP together so there's no danger of them getting confused. I thought it was fine as is.

Ren, Rei and Neil have both done things like this before (New X) and you weren't as fussy about Blaide, New Caucasus or New Kabuto.

[Captain Marvelous]

Blade was Keiji.

[Suzie Miyazaki]

Yeah:
Blade was Keiji
Blaide was Rei

Kabuto was Max
New Kabuto was Ren

Caucasus was Nega
New Caucasus was Neil

So three people have done this sort of thing so far, with fair justification for the differences between them and the "Original". And like I said, if you're that annoyed with Rei doing this then you don't have to have Nakida and Raina don't have to meet each other.

[[Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke]

Next time we're all online, then.

[Suzie Miyazaki]

Which might not be for a while since I have to restart school and I have a feeling if you're all online at the same time then a massive flame war will end up getting started.

Should I take this as you saying that you aren't okay with anything we've put forward?

[[Kaisu] Elizabeth Clarke]

There won't be any flaming on my part and anyway, it's happened.

[Kase]

After about 3 hours of discussion, give or take, we've come to an accord on the matter. It's solved.